Let's do some writing to improve

[mickeymouse]

Hi everybody , as you know , English is very popular in the world and it become very important in our life . Nowaday , every school see E as a main subject and after granduate , it will be useful for finding a job . So , from now , let's improve by writing some theme which I give . ^_^

--- The first is about English ^_^ . This isn't difficult to write . After finished , let's translate them into vietnamese .

---The second is about your city where living ^_^ . So , You can introduce landscape of native country for friends to know . This is look like the first , let's translate your writing into vietnamese

Don't worry your level about programmatical rules because we have to know mistakes which we make to repair it . >:-D< >:-D< >:-D<

[Hank Williams]

Well, well, what makes my little girl come here? :D
Yep, English is the most popular language all over the world (excepting Chinese, of course, cos their population's so terrible! They're almost living in everywhere in this old earth. ^_^)
My city is such a sad sad place, sometimes I think it's as small as my nose. Just take out your bikes, ride for some minutes, and you can see you're back to the starting point :). People almost listen to Cải Lương, Vọng Cổ, or Oldies, they're pretty bad at foreign songs, in other words, they-do-not-care.
However, I still love my city 'cos I had my childhood, my boyhood here. At that time, I was so happy, had nothing to worry about, and just played all day long. The streets, the trees, they were so beautiful, sometimes, there're some people cycling across,... the people were so kind,...

[lemoney]

Yep, English is the most popular language all over the world (excepting Chinese, of course, cos their population's so terrible! They're almost living in everywhere in this old earth. ^_^)
How’s about Spanish…man..you think it’s small like your nose http://www.redcafe.net/images/smilies/xmas-biggrin.gif.
Right..’n you can enjoy pretty melodies in Enghlish songs.

Different from his city…my city is so active and eventful…you can see that in every holiday…specially on last SEA Games…you can contact with Northern, Central, Southern people in here…So where is that heaven ?…he he Ho Chi Minh City :>. But people usually look busy in here…You rarely see the friendly like other cities of South Việt Nam. You can smell the “terrible air” at 5:00 pm in every evening all the streets. However, you also find some light sensations on ladies in white Áo dài after school…they look beautiful..=P~…men, don’t think I have “35 blood”.

I also love taking out with my bicycles (unlike the Chally 50 of Mr Hank..he he I knew it in here)…ride along the Tôn Đức Thắng, Lê Duẩn street…to Bạch Đằng wharf..I love this city where I was born and lived. That’s all.

http://www.vietnamvisitor.com/images/saigonbikes.jpg
...active destination...

http://www.nhk.or.jp/asia/old/photos/7-3-30.gif
…”Bad dream” in every 5:00 pm…

http://www.babbage.demon.co.uk/images/vietnam/girls.jpg
…some pretty feelings =P~…

http://home.swbell.net/robmock/Can%20Tho%20Waterfront.jpg
…Can tho my second fatherland…

…Go on guys…introduce your city..he he

[Cigar]

Hi,at last Mickey mouse have meet her bro,Hank..good luck for too of you.
I know sometimes I have the over_ring_kidding,but don't be upset about that..because I not have bad thinking.
I was borrn in Hanoi..but my memorize just fade day by day..now I can't remember every thing,it just some even ocur in my childhood..I remember when I was three..that time..may be I will drown in the wave of Red river..but fortunately..some one rescue me..that memorize make me scare..so now I hate water,hic hic.
When I was four,my family moved to Dalat..it's realy cold in the winter..
You live in the South of Viet Nam..how can you imagine how terrible the Ice_rain was..it destroy my house's roof..that day my mum,my sis and I couldn't do anything,we just hug together and..cry.
I can remember when I was seven,my mom go alone to the bamboo forest and she cut those tree without any helping from men..that day my dad was busy in his company,so he can help her with his hand.
Next time I will tell you something about my second country,Dalat..good bye.
P/S:Has fun,MM..you met you bro again,ha ha

[BROOM]

Dalat ? great! i like Dalat very much. but you said "city where you living", so i must tell about Ho Chi Minh city! you see, SEA Games passed, and i think SEA Games was a great success, it made everyone become friendly and happy, right ? i saw an accident ,but they didn't shout at each other, they jumped and cried loudly "Vietnam- Victory!", and when Vietnamese football team scored the last goal, everyone cried,because everyone was so happy, so cheerful, they huged each other!! i will never forget that picture!

[lemoney]

..I remember when I was three..that time..may be I will drown in the wave of Red river..but fortunately..some one rescue me..that memorize make me scare
It was a bad dream for you, man. You could thanks for that. Maybe your guardian angel helped you and gave you a chance to live till now. Why do you harm yourself by smoking like that…just by a little cigarette…It is not worth.

so now I hate water,hic hic.…so you can’t swim http://www.redcafe.net/images/smilies/xmas-biggrin.gif :))

Dalat…It’s an interesting place. I had came there when I was eight. What a pity ! Impression I had…was just rain, rain and rain all day. Three days, I did not go more places. I remember Đồi Cù where I first saw a real horse in my life…first touched him.. but couldn’t ride ‘cuz I was too small …just a kid :-s.

And Datanla waterfall (I can’t remember exactly what its name) where I ran down and couldn’t stop…the road sloped down…It was true. I remember I had to hit someone to stop. It’s awful #-o

“Mưa bụi” all day and It’s so cold…how I scared when first I touched quilt in my guest-house..hic you know 2 in three days I did not brush my teeth in morning cuz water so cold :p…I could remember that…bad dream :-s.

But I’ll wait for your introduction about your city nowaday

[mickeymouse]

Yep, English is the most popular language all over the world (excepting Chinese, of course, cos their population's so terrible! They're almost living in everywhere in this old earth. ^_^)
=> You only wrote 2 sentences for the title about E ^_^ , not long .

There are many ... many foreign language in the world . In that , English is the most popular language . I asked by myself that Why there are more english people than chinese people . After that , I find the answer for my problem . There are some reason . In the past , English is the one of countries where make war . They went all over the world to invade . There are many colonies in everywhere ^_^ . As the saying goes : " The sun never sit in the E " . You can understand that :" Mặt trời không bao giờ lặn ở nước anh " .
After the 13 colonies that seceded from Great Britain and fought the War of Independence became the 13 original states and some others became independent , E lost many colonies . However , People speak E not only to reduce , but also raising many . With chinese ( C ) , people who speak it is living in that . And one other reason is between E and C , learning E is easier than C ^_^ . Nowaday , It become very important in life . In our country , When we go to school , E is the main subject and after graduate , It need for finding your job . You can think that a people don't know E and a people speak E very good , Who will receive that job ? My E is not good now , but I hope it will be beter in future . What do you think ???

[Hank Williams]

How’s about Spanish…man..you think it’s small like your nose
OK, you're looking for some Spanish, amigo? http://c.1asphost.com/thauminh/Smilies/xmas-biggrin.gif
When I was a little boy, I also had a memory that's unforgetable. I and my classmates went swimming, actually, the "swimming-pool" was not far from my house much, it's right beside my house-it's a river :p. We're swimming and joking pretty funny, in addition, there's a pretty girl living on the other side of the river :p, she's also our classmate (what a pity! Now I have no chance to meet her again, cos we've both moving to another place). Suddenly, one of my friends shouted out loud, she's about to be drown cos he couldn't swim (he tried to go down the river to see the girl more clearly, and make some noise to get impression :p). I swam to him, and helped him, he's trying to hold me tight, and he almost "went to hell with me". However, the "rescue" was successful! At that time, I thought that I almost died :(.
OK, I have no time to write more.
Gracias and Adios! :)

[kefka]

" I swam to him, and helped him, he's trying to hold me tight, and he almost "went to hell with me". " => oh man :)) , this alone would cause misundestanding :))
but i don't get it , why would we have to talk bout Vietnam landscape when we all know it too well ( hope none of you here are foreigner , huh )
people who travelled over sea already , we want you to tell us more and more about foreign country , such as the little accidence mr.HH had wtih his friend :))

[Cigar]

наиболее качественный, но и дорогой вариант. Импортные материалы характеризуются стабильной диэлектрической проницаемостью, оборудования
I like those word but I think it's very hard to learn...may be in this rum,only Mr Crocodile can understand that,he he.
You didn't know why I like Russian so much,I have a reason..I was learning at the Tecnique Univer..our country was a social Country..and all the tecnique we have now was from Russia..some time I feel embrassed how to design some thing..but I can't because the only document to view full of Russian:((
When my Uncle came home from Ukraina,he taught me a little but now I almost forget all about that.

[Guo Jia]

hey cigar,you said that you had learned in a Tecnique University.
So, do you know Geology?

[Sun Shang Xiang]

I don't know any thing about Russian because noone in my family have studied Rusian but they know English and french.My mother has taught me English from since I was 5 years old.And now I am studying French.but Russian is much different from English and french.English and french is Germanic but Russian is Slave and I think Rusian is much more difficult to learn.
Hey, Cigar, can you teach me Russian?I am very curious to learn a new language.
I am now studying in Hanoi university of Science, High school specialized in Biology and next year may be I'll go to France to study Medicinal so I must learn French.I think it's very close to English and i like it very much!

[Cigar]

hey cigar,you said that you had learned in a Tecnique University.
So, do you know Geology?

Geology mean"trắc địa" if I right,,may be..but I not learn at Civil..I don't know how to build the Bride.
To Sun:Nowaday,Russian is not popular..so I can't improve my Russian day by day,I almost forgot all of them,how can I teach you,hic hic:x:x
French have the terrible grammar..I heard that.

[lemoney]

What hell is going on ?...hic hic :-s in this box, many guys have known more than 2 languages…English + Japanese; English + French; English + Russian and English + Spanish (“Mr” Hank http://www.redcafe.net/images/smilies/xmas-biggrin.gif). How about me ? two, but Vietnamese + English :-s.


My E is not good now , but I hope it will be beter in future
The same as the way Hank, Cigar, Wolf, Justwonder talked…hic hic why are they so “modest” ? So where is my position in them :(( ? When can I master like them :-s ?...

There seems to have been a people wave from Oath Garden box go to English box…?
Is this your good work, isn’t it Cigar ?

[Hank Williams]

Uh huh, study has no limit, especially English, I like it, so it's not strange at all when I always say that "I hafta work harder to be better at English", and moreover I feel I'm just an amateur, I'm not as good as others. For instance, take a look at some posts of mr. Justwonder, mr. Hung Long, mr. Little David (he's gone for such a long time), or mr. baylenthesky, are they the masters? :) So sometimes I feel shame for myself.

[dieukydieu]

Yeah, i read a lot about the country of all of you. Yeah, there are many beautiful scenes in Viet Nam, Ciga in HA noi - the capital of our country, and some in the Southern and some in the Middle! And the atmosphere in this and that place is very difference. Some is cold and some is very hot and others are warm!
My native land is very warm and sometimes cold but when comparing to the Northern.
My home land has many beautiful places and it's in a fertile Mekong River Delta, 4 seasons warm and the climate is very equable!
Mekogn River Delta divide into 2 parts, Tien branch and Hau branch. and as you know, The My Thuan bridge - the proudness of the people in Mekong River Delta.
If you once go to this place, you can enjoy the fruits of this place. You can see the forest of flowers , leaves, green trees...
WHen you are on the boat in the river you can feel very comfortable and you can enjoy much time to see many other boat and the life in the river ,on the water is very wonderful!
If you have free time, please visit my country to see how the heart and the soul of the people in the river is!! Friendly and Lovely and Hospitable!!!!!.....
I can express all, but that's enough. And if you want to know more can you come here. I m willing to volunteer to be a tour guild and thanks a lot !!....

[vuminhtan_84]

um, I have been studying english at university for two year, next year, I start to study french.I don't know whether I can study it.Anyone can help me with it?

[Backy]

Hey you're a student of university and you are studying english,aren't ,why you like game,you should study ,don't play gâme any more,if not ,you will fail the exam

[vuminhtan_84]

ah thank you for your suggestion but I play game to learn new words and listen to conversations(RE is an example).Moreover,game has been an essential part of my life(I have played it for a long time).However,you're right,I will do my best(include being online and study he he)

[Hank Williams]

Well, well, well, you're studying Bachelor of English, right? I used to take this course 2 years ago, but I just studied there for about 2 months. Exactly, when we study Bachelor of English, our foreign language subject is French.
Ah, vuminhtan, if you wanna get more successful in your study-goal, I think you need to practice more :), coz the assignments are not easy at all. My friends have to do a loooooooot of difficult assignments, and they're busy as dogs.

[vuminhtan_84]

of course they are.I'm studying it next year, but I think it's not as difficult as we think.To study that subject,we should read many essays to broaden our knowledge(like a literature test)

[Duy_Tran]

Compare with HCM city, my place is quite so boring. It is not noisy, not evenful as HCM city.
I remember when i was still in HCM city during the holidays, it was a very sweet memory in my mind. A day was quite long for me to do a lot of useful things. In the morning, i went out to take breakfast, there were a lot of things for me to choose such as beef noodle in soup, Hue beef noodle, grilled pork rice and so on. Then i went to my cousin's house to play chess till noon or sometimes we went together to a chess club. In the afternoon, i started it by my lunch at home with food cooked by my mom. She usually cooks at least 4 kinds of food which are a vegetable soup, a dish of vegetable, fried meat, and tofu or beans. After that, i went to basket ball club coz i like basket ball very much. At there, i had got a lot of friends to play together. We used to divide into 3-4 teams to play together, the 2 lost teams had to pay for all's dinner in some small restaurants or food gallery. In the evening, i could stay at home to watch news and sports or sometimes i went to my old high school friends' house to talk with them some nice remembrances when we had still been in high school. With me, a day was too long and significant, i could do a lot of interesting activities just in a day in HCM city
However, in here, even the city is quite so beautiful, but time is running so fast and boring. Firstly, it's very fresh and cleaned compared with HCM city. They plant a lot of trees around the city and with a large number of hills in the city, they draws up the city as a classical landscape. Moreover, the city stays beside the sea, so there is a large port with many boats. Go furthur the center, there are a lot of small beaches for people to go there to take walk or swim. On the other hand, opposite with a beautiful landscape of this city, the life-style here is quite so boring. After a day of working or studying, people would like to go back home to relax, thus the streets are getting emptier and quieter. It's still the same at weekend. People just go out for shopping to buy food or some necessary stuffs, or churchs. Seldom they go out to parks or countryside. The reasons are possibly that it's too far to go there and they'd like to stay at to watch movie. It's the same to me, i just stay at home at weekend. My friends just know to go to bar at weekend, but i don't like it. With some short holidays, it's so terrible to stay at home everyday. But i don't know what to do other things. Going to other places around the city now is quite so boring for me, i've been some tours and found out the landscape in NZ is quite so boring, every place is so similar to gether with forest, river, sea, cows and grass fields...

[MasterMindSeries]

i dont thinkyou are right! I think that our place is most beautiful,most friendly and most other... that can't express exactly! hi`!
i think my country has many rivers and many mountains can you guess this place is?
i think if now i can return to my country i 'm sure feel happy!
but now i must do something for my future, must study and work at the same time. i think i work hard and study harder, but i feel that my country seem to talk to me that i will try and i can be happy, more than ever!
ok, now i'm willing to do this and that, and so i can understand someone far away home like me. i can share with any one who is like me!